Yellow hat:My diagram is set up really good and its neat.

Black hat:Didn’t explain it well enuf

This my wow 4

Yellow hat: I used discriptive words in my writing

Black hat:Next time i will use more adjectives because it might make my writing better

I think my Kai Kaha writing was good because I used descriptive words in my story

One bright sunny afternoon. As Hamish and I stride out of rebel sports. We heard someone crying out for help.

We glanced around to see if we could see anyone. Then unexpected I heard someone calling ”Jade over here!!” It sounded like Varian. Finally we caught up to him. ”Why are they chasing you?” I yelled as I dodged passed a little little boy playing with a truck. Varian pounced over a tall picket fence. ”Cause they want my pie he shouted back.

I had a idea so i went into a dairy. And brought five pies so every got a pie. After that no was chasing Varian.

Yellow hat: I used good descriptive words in my writing

Black hat: Not decriptive because i could of change some words

I choose this: because my presentation like my title is good because i used colour and I used colour in every thing  so I think i done well with this peace of work

I choose this because I used heaps of 5 senses in my paragraph and my GOAL was to use 5 sense

I stumbled upon this old haunted house. I silently the steps creaked. I touch the cold gold door handle.I touch suddenly the door handle Brock into two Pisces. As I inaudibly throw the entrance. Unexpectedly the floor boards creaked it echoed around the habitation.I observe a glimpse of a shadow dashed past the window.All of a sudden a yelp came from up stares.

I moved up three levels and when I moved up to level three my scores went down.

I choose my handwriting because my goal was all  my letters to slope from right to left.

Why I choose this:Because I like how i used heaps of my 5 senses.

What I did good about it:Use my 5 senses good.

The smell of freshly petrol fumes whiffing up my nose.The reek of freshly trim grass waffled up my nose.See the lawn clippings flying around.The grass  clipping looked like green stunt planes in the air.The sound of the lawn mower buzzed around like a bumblebee.The lawn clipping sprang out of the catcher and floated into my mouth.The clipping tasted like a ball of string.Mum said it looked like a putting green.

I want to improve my writing because it is messy

 I want to improve my swimming because it is bad